Hi! today I am going to talk about my jeje,Caring. Who is very fat. She has a lot of pimples but still beautiful. She is also shy but it doesn't matter to me and she doesn't tell how old are her. So I got a little cross with this.
It is a Pokemon , it is a strong one
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Mistakes :
1. no jeje in English, Caring is your helper
2. she does not tell how old is she ! Not how old are her ! Terrible !
3. I am crossed, not I am cross.
Please correct and please be careful with your writing. Don't rush. I don't remember this as the xxxth time I say this to you.
Good luck.
Mama