If you need to write a story you need to do a mind map and check your punctuation. After you finish writing the story,read the whole story. Then send it to the editor. The editor would check your punctuation. I will tell about writing a story in the next post.
Today my breakfast was egg and luncheon meat sandwich. It was very yummy. I went to Lei Yu Mun day camp with Yahoo and his mom & dad. We played archery, gateball and cycling, it was really fun. I went to Yahoo's home to play football and Pokemon. Our dinner was hotpot at 'dai pai dong', the noodle and beef were yummy. It was a really really good day. And now I have to sleep because I have school tomorrow.
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