The first day, when I went to Taiwan. I thought I lost my NDS memory card. So I wanted to cry. At the airplane I played Super Mario Bros and Super Soccer. I forgot to say Yahoo went with us. When we were at Taiwan we were taking photos. It was fun. We played baseball near the hotel.
The second day,we went to Taiwan central. we took 3 hours bus. At night, we played monopoly.
The third day, I was feeding rabbits and I played the ship that swung.
The fourth day, We were went back to HK and we found the NDS memory card.
Comments
It is a nice brief summary of the trip. But it would be even nicer if you can write more about your feelings.
Also, can you please really double check your spelling, grammar, typing before you post ? It's a good and very important habit in writing.
Can you please relook into your last post and do the edit and corrections ?
Love,
Mama
P.S. The past perfect tense of swing is swung, not swinged (no such word).