Today I played tennis with Dennis and this was my last time to play with Dennis tennis. Bye bye! At lunch I ate spaghetti. Yummy! I ate 3 bowls of spaghetti. Then I went to maths and I thoght it was fun. Bye again. Next it was teakkwondo I said bye too!
It is a Pokemon , it is a strong one

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Dad
Yes, I also like this topic and your writing a lot. It's creative and interesting. I also like the picture. It arouses my attention.
However, you should say my FLAT or APARTMENT as we are just living in ONE SLOT OF A BUILDING. HOUSE is the one that Chris and Kit are (your kindergarten friend) living in. Just want to clarify with you.
Anyway, well done!
Mama