Today my breakfast was egg and luncheon meat sandwich. It was very yummy. I went to Lei Yu Mun day camp with Yahoo and his mom & dad. We played archery, gateball and cycling, it was really fun. I went to Yahoo's home to play football and Pokemon. Our dinner was hotpot at 'dai pai dong', the noodle and beef were yummy. It was a really really good day. And now I have to sleep because I have school tomorrow.
It is a Pokemon , it is a strong one
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Dad
Yes, I also like this topic and your writing a lot. It's creative and interesting. I also like the picture. It arouses my attention.
However, you should say my FLAT or APARTMENT as we are just living in ONE SLOT OF A BUILDING. HOUSE is the one that Chris and Kit are (your kindergarten friend) living in. Just want to clarify with you.
Anyway, well done!
Mama