Hi! today I am going to talk about my jeje,Caring. Who is very fat. She has a lot of pimples but still beautiful. She is also shy but it doesn't matter to me and she doesn't tell how old are her. So I got a little cross with this.
This is a 4 day blogger.The first day I got a teakwondo exam and I need to get a red-black belt. Then I saw 3 belts and then I said there are 3 belts there were 2 persons and I am the third one. the second day I was moving to a new house it was 5000 dollars. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! The third day I went to my friends house and have a slept over and it was his birthday! The fourth day I went to Lam Tin and have a teakwondo lesson.
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Mistakes :
1. no jeje in English, Caring is your helper
2. she does not tell how old is she ! Not how old are her ! Terrible !
3. I am crossed, not I am cross.
Please correct and please be careful with your writing. Don't rush. I don't remember this as the xxxth time I say this to you.
Good luck.
Mama