I was writing a trip to Malaysia wirh daddy and he told me the writing tip is to make the passage like the shape of a kite. First, daddy told me not to use the first day , the second day and something like that. Use what is your favourite food and what is your favourite activy or describe Malaysia. I want to tell you a surprising part of my passage. I met my football teamate at the hotel. Wow! I hope you can write a passage like me.
Today I played tennis with Dennis and this was my last time to play with Dennis tennis. Bye bye! At lunch I ate spaghetti. Yummy! I ate 3 bowls of spaghetti. Then I went to maths and I thoght it was fun. Bye again. Next it was teakkwondo I said bye too!
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