I was writing a trip to Malaysia wirh daddy and he told me the writing tip is to make the passage like the shape of a kite. First, daddy told me not to use the first day , the second day and something like that. Use what is your favourite food and what is your favourite activy or describe Malaysia. I want to tell you a surprising part of my passage. I met my football teamate at the hotel. Wow! I hope you can write a passage like me.
This is a 4 day blogger.The first day I got a teakwondo exam and I need to get a red-black belt. Then I saw 3 belts and then I said there are 3 belts there were 2 persons and I am the third one. the second day I was moving to a new house it was 5000 dollars. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! The third day I went to my friends house and have a slept over and it was his birthday! The fourth day I went to Lam Tin and have a teakwondo lesson.
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