I was writing a trip to Malaysia wirh daddy and he told me the writing tip is to make the passage like the shape of a kite. First, daddy told me not to use the first day , the second day and something like that. Use what is your favourite food and what is your favourite activy or describe Malaysia. I want to tell you a surprising part of my passage. I met my football teamate at the hotel. Wow! I hope you can write a passage like me.
Today my breakfast was egg and luncheon meat sandwich. It was very yummy. I went to Lei Yu Mun day camp with Yahoo and his mom & dad. We played archery, gateball and cycling, it was really fun. I went to Yahoo's home to play football and Pokemon. Our dinner was hotpot at 'dai pai dong', the noodle and beef were yummy. It was a really really good day. And now I have to sleep because I have school tomorrow.
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